tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5117780671519051815.post288620754249049193..comments2009-12-05T10:50:54.378-05:00Comments on Jeanette...: Revised Paragraphjnttrochttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15574250149093138695noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5117780671519051815.post-21722398564734507112009-10-24T20:54:33.592-04:002009-10-24T20:54:33.592-04:00Good work! Good use of your quotations here. Keep ...Good work! Good use of your quotations here. Keep working on sentence-level language clarity. For example, your first sentence is a fragment, believe it or not. How could you rework to make it clearer and a complete sentence?Prof. T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00284898866409356025noreply@blogger.com